It looks like it's hitting the overflow tank strap and/or radiator. That'll cause it to make more noise.
Best place to mount the fuel pump is as close to the tank as possible to reduce flow problems, so in back would be better. That said I've seen them work in the engine bay.
Best place to mount the fuel pump is as close to the tank as possible to reduce flow problems, so in back would be better. That said I've seen them work in the engine bay.